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Die a Little More
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:39:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Everyday I die a little more
I think of you as I lay on the floor
As I cry these crimson tears
Running through my head so many fears
Do you think of me as much as I do you
Are your days just as hard to get through
I just can't get you off my mind
It's so hard to leave my dreams behind
You're the one who keeps my heart burning
I lie here & await your day of returning
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2005-06-16 23:39:45]
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Re: Die a Little More
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by Rikki on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:57:47 PM AEST
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| well written, you wouldn't happen to be a Rob Zombie fan, would you? |
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Re: Die a Little More
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by MomentInTime on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:04:47 AM AEST
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Indeed a well expressed write - certainly captures your feelings.
I am not sure how you'll take this -> crimson tears are becoming somewhat overdone.
Jordan :o) |
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Re: Die a Little More
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:23:35 PM AEST
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| Really good Love the poem gurl. SOME people are just haters because there poerty isnt as awsome as yours! |
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