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Indecision.
Contributed by
BlindRomantic
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:37:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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No, I don't love him
I don't care one bit,
His cute smile and laugh
How our hands perfectly fit.
No! I don't love him
Wouldn't mind if he died,
Though I'd miss his stories
And him standing by my side.
No, I don't love him
It would hurt too much,
The thought of losing a love
I could never imagine such.
No! I don't love him
But he's so honest and sweet,
No! I don't love him
Despite what you may think.
Maybe, I could love him
If I overlooked the past,
Forgave him the things he's done
'Cause this NEW HIM will last.
Maybe, I could love him
If I knew he loved me too,
To put my heart out there
These feelings being true.
Maybe, I could love him
If he chose to stay,
If I owned the words
That I can never say.
Maybe, I could love him
If I made-up my mind,
Maybe, I could love him
If I knew he'd forever be mine.
Yes! I love him
Though I hate to admit -
I never want to lose him
He's my perfect fit.
Yes! I love him
Until the day I die,
No matter what comes of it
I know he's my should on which to cry.
Yes! I love him
And can no longer deny,
Yes! I love him
Now just await a reply.
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BlindRomantic
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2005-06-16 22:37:16]
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Re: Indecision.
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by nhisname2005 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:41:21 PM AEST
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| A very enjoyable read. I really like how you put these words together and how it made me feel. great title. sandy |
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Re: Indecision.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:12:34 PM AEST
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Wwwwow!!!!!!!
Very powerfull!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Indecision.
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by Aeturos on
Monday, 23rd January 2006 @ 08:22:39 PM AEST
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| (: I like this one a lot. It makes me happy, for some reason. Good job. |
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Re: Indecision.
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by needledancing on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 08:08:56 PM AEST
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| Very well done this well versed gradual fall into what we all seek....the love, the acceptance, the caress of a universal force...fall and enjoy the emotion, devotion of loves call. |
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