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when you have once loved a liar
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
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no matter what you say or do
they will make out like your misconstrewed
it doesn't matter how deeply they've hurt you
they'll continue trying to throw you in the blackened pool
the pain is quite precise
and for once they miss they'll do it twice
I know this poem is juvenile
but I'll be better after a while
aside from the fact there were witnesses
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by venkat on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:35:08 AM AEST
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| My dear friend Nessa, Why do you say your poem is juvenile, when it is brief and beautiful. Be cofident and root out the pain with willpower..venkat |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:46:15 AM AEST
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Please don't feel this way ... from the poetry and comments you make you have such a beautiful spirit - don't wallow in pain and despair .... (oh my goodness, did I say that !! - don't wallow in pain and despair !!! - damn I wish I could take my own advice, but you know, sometimes it's easier to see from the outside in :))))) ...
Although this is a very sad poem ... it's a great poem and you should finish it ... Jan |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 05:53:12 AM AEST
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C'mon grrl....get to work...finish the poem..... it's good....
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by nomad on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:00:19 PM AEST
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| You have finished writing this, Lady Fawn, by not finishing it. And I especially enjoy the unwritten happy ending. Excellent write. |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 11:21:28 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I thought that you should of finished it, because it started to really catch my attention, and it seemes to have alot of truth to it . |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by Kirby on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 01:52:02 PM AEST
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| Soooo true! I am in that situation right now! Damn ex boyfriend! Hey I still love him with all my ehart and that sucks so whatever! I loved this poem! LKove:::kirby |
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Re: when you have once loved a liar
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 05:57:59 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is probably a late comment, but as I see it "better late, then never." This poem is anything , but juvenile. It speaks the truth. *S* Cynthia |
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