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Can You
Contributed by
visualizing_life
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:09:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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can you hear me
screaming?
can you see me
drowning?
your here
you told me you cared
you told me you loved me
so why won't you save me?
im drowning
in a pool
of self-destruction
and hate
i cant feel anymore
the pain or hurt
or anger
i have no compassion for you
in the back of my mind
i always knew
knew you were lying
but why did you let it go so long?
thats my problem
i believed you
i cared too much
i let myself fall in love
and now im crushed
you didnt save me
maybe one day
you'll think of me
in your new life and
come to see my headstone
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Re: Can You
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by foxfire44 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:14:34 PM AEST
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| good poem very intence |
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Re: Can You
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:30:44 PM AEST
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WOW !! Intense writing!!
Good luck with your poems |
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Re: Can You
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by HoPeFuLtKn on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 04:18:08 PM AEST
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| awesome as all the others. |
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