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Image
Contributed by
MalevolentDreamer
on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Looking into the mirror I see
A stranger staring back at me
Her features distraught,stringed with pain
Her green eyes saying she's going insane
I see the darkness closing in
I see her thoughts stirring within
In her mind,disturbed and confused
I stare into her eyes,slightly amused
But then come the tears that she cries
Flowing like a river from her eyes
Tasting the salt I begin to see
That girl in the mirror is nothing more than me.
© 2001 MalevolentDreamer (All rights reserved)
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MalevolentDreamer
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2003-01-06 01:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 01:52:50 AM AEST (User
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Yes, this is something I relate to very well. Well written poem. |
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Re: Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ronald on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 02:16:10 AM AEST (User
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Good poem, pal! Keep it up |
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Re: Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by EmptyWords on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 03:00:38 AM AEST (User
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Nice and full of feeling...
Peace |
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Re: Image
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 08:24:35 AM AEST (User
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Oh Oh Oh i like this one alot....this is sooooo beautiful. I especially love the last lines where it says Tasting the salt i begin to see That girl in the mirror is nothing more than me....ahhh that's beautiful, thanks for sharing thsi one i enjoyed it alot....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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