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Insanity
Contributed by
dorkfish
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:00:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Reailty gone
Past is present
Dwelling on old emotions
Jumbled mind
No sense of time
Believing ones own lies
Body tattered
Jittery movements
No real care for life
Reality removed
Insanity consumed
Lack of dreams and ambitions
Sleep deprived
Malnourished at times
Always wanting more
Weak and frail
No inncocence to prevail
Heading for disaster
Help is needed
Life is cheated
Unknowingly dying slowly
Loss of mind
No sense of time
Gone from reality
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dorkfish
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2005-06-16 19:00:20]
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Re: Insanity
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by Rikki on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 12:02:56 AM AEST
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| This is so sad because I am a recovering addict, and I know how it feels to be the addict, and to see someone you care about waste away. What's even worse is watching yourself waste away and no one taking notice. Good writing, Rikki |
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Re: Insanity
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:50:14 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, very descriptive and full of feeling.
Great write,
--amanda-- |
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Re: Insanity
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 04:11:52 PM AEST
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hey i know jenna!
good one.
we have seen to many people go down this road.
peaches |
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Re: Insanity
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:04:40 PM AEST
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| A very good write and very well worded. Life is hard and does feel this way all to much. I know this feeling all to well over here in Iraq. take care and keep your head up....Steve |
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Re: Insanity
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by burningintherain14 on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:55:42 PM AEST
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| Great poem I must say! I can relate to it somewhat. Keep up the good work! Love Always and Forever-x- Heather |
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Re: Insanity
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 01:00:36 PM AEST
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Good job Fish...I like the last two stanzas especially...So sad. I hope this person is doing better, and sees you for the caring friend you are...
Scorp. |
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