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Sometimes
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:55:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Sometimes I'm in a daze,
Sometimes life is like a maze.
Sometimes I feel like I can't be seen,
Sometimes I guess my beauty just isn't that keen.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
... [
2005-06-16 18:55:39]
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Re: Sometimes
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:01:54 PM AEST
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Very nice job in so few words...I like it. Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: Sometimes
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by foxfire44 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:09:52 PM AEST
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| that is a very nice ditty I like that it was short but said a lot |
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Re: Sometimes
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:27:06 PM AEST
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gosh, such meaningful thoughts that I can relate to very much. Well done
you are promising |
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Re: Sometimes
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:44:56 AM AEST
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They are right, this was a great poem. Amazing how much you can express in such little words.
Great write, keep it up
--amanda-- |
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Re: Sometimes
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by justme03 on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 08:37:42 PM AEST
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i love this one too
:D
ur a good poet
and i didnt even kno it
ROFL
~Kortnie~ |
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