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Tear my World Apart
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:45:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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it's taken all this time for me to realize
what you mean to me
if i had one more chance then i would take it all back
just to show you i can't live without you here
you tear my world apart
if only i could just make this right
there's nothing i want more
there's nothing i want more
than just to be with you
be with only you
just when i thought i'd found who i've been searching for
They say i'm too late
I have not forgotten all that we shared in the past
just another chance is all that i ask
take my hand we'll disappear from it all
it doesn't make sense if you're not here with me
Teach me how to close my eyes now
Show me the light that with-in you I can see.
Copyright ©
MajesticPoet
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2005-06-16 17:45:09]
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Re: Tear my World Apart
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:40:02 PM AEST
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Great job! I truly enjoyed this piece, and I hope you win her back...
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Re: Tear my World Apart
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:41:26 PM AEST
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Thanks bro. I also hope I win her back. She truly is my life. I am so sick to my stomach just thinking of not being with her. Love hurts more then I could imagine. I've been in love before, but never where the love for one is so deep, that even the deepest corner of my body is filled with it... I am glad you liked it.
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Re: Tear my World Apart
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:55:31 PM AEST
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short and concise I loved it, but remember
that no one is worth cutting and bleeding
over. Stay strong if its meant to be you will get
this person back.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Tear my World Apart
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:34:55 PM AEST
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very heart-wrenching, I can very much relate to your heartache and I can sense such strong feelings of sadness. Ur poetry touches me & it is very beautiful.
May she realise what a wonderful person you are.
Good luck. |
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Re: Tear my World Apart
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:23:55 AM AEST
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Aw beautiful poem! I hope you win her back!
Good Luck :)
--amanda-- |
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