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Remember?
Contributed by
DaysWillFade
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:48:59 PM in AEST
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Remember that night
Remember your fight
Remember the look on my face
the one that will never erase!
So don't pretend like your there
or that you really care
Because time passes by
and i don't need you since you said
Good-bye
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DaysWillFade
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2005-06-16 15:48:59]
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Re: Remember?
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by Kie on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:34:48 PM AEST
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I have asked myself the questions and regrets of goodbye. Wondering more times than naught if we are ever thought of or needed after that one word----ends what we know.
The title was very fitting to this poem.
I now have something to ponder on.
Kie |
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Re: Remember?
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by Shnyzz on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:20:50 PM AEST
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| There you go. You just got to move on after good-bye. Allthough it's easier said then done. |
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Re: Remember?
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 08:06:59 AM AEST
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I think you could have changed the sentence "and i don't need you since you said"
It doesn't fit in with the flow of the poem.
Nice write though,
--amanda-- |
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