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Sailing To The Moon
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:31:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The silvery light she beckons as we sail across the sea
With all her shrouded magic, she is calling out to me
A song, a gentle lullaby," come visit me and soon "
My heart is light and happy,we are sailing to the moon
The shadow of her spirit lies,so far acroos the sky
And dancing around her silver ball,the tiny atoms fly
The mists of time surround her in a soft and smokey haze
A picture of amazing grace,a symphony of praise
The water laps and shimmers as our boat moves on today
Happy in it's quest to guide us to the milky way
The creaks and groans of timber as we sail away tonight
The flapping of the sail in breeze as we seem to take flight
We feel such joy, elation, as we move towards our goal
The rush of pure excitement, fit to move our very soul
Our destination waits for us,it cannot be too soon
My love and I in our small boat are sailing to the moon
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gwenevere
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2005-06-16 15:31:22]
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Re: Sailing To The Moon
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:25:40 PM AEST
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This is a magical and very touching write...I really enjoyed this. Good flow to it as well...
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Re: Sailing To The Moon
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by Mild_Tempest on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:43:23 PM AEST
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| Aww... Isn't that cute? |
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Re: Sailing To The Moon
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:07:19 PM AEST
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It is like a lovers fairy tale. Rather enjoyable.
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Re: Sailing To The Moon
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:30:01 PM AEST
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A beautiful writting, dipped in a pool of
magical emotions, that quench the thirst of a
most romantic heart, a painting worth a veiw
in any gallery of art . . .
Ben |
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