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Only Human
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aden
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:29:39 PM in AEST
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If you humiliate us we blush,
If you starve us we hunger,
If you deprive us we need,
If you hate us we feel,
If you kick us we fall,
If you shoot us we bleed,
If you kill us we die,
If you think us different we are the same.
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aden
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Re: Only Human
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by gwenevere on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 03:45:48 PM AEST
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| It may be a sensitive subject but it shouldn't be hidden away.Whatever the race we are all human. well written |
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Re: Only Human
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 06:59:07 PM AEST
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The holocaust was and always will be the most horrendous blight on the soul of mankind. There is no one person walking on this earth that is any better than another.
Racism and bigotry and politics will be the end of this world as we know it. We will kill ourselves long before this planet explodes. Brilliant write,
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Re: Only Human
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by CodyJ on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:27:17 PM AEST
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| I think.... this may have a message even greater than you aimed for. Very all encompassing of humanity in general. Most excellent. Seriously, kudos. |
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Re: Only Human
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:05:43 PM AEST
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And if we love you, what then? a very
compelling write, depicting the most tragic
of all human flaws, the need for catergories,
once again you have pened a magnificent
masterpeice, and all that took, was being
human . . .
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Re: Only Human
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:50:00 PM AEST
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truthful thoughts and I very much agree with you.
The severe persucution the jews were subject to by the Germans was horrific, I have watched videos and heard stories, it just breaks my heart.
The cruelty of the world hey.
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Re: Only Human
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:33:25 PM AEST
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| i AM SURE YOU COULD ADD QUITE A BIT MORE; but how very true, what you have written. It is really a shame that the world finds that so hard to believe. |
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Re: Only Human
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:44:30 AM AEST
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Sniff
Your write brought tears to my eyes.
So deep.
well done |
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