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Lost To Voices

Contributed by sride686 on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Demons live with in my mind
They speak to me in riddles and rimes
They move threw out my mind
Never to be seen before this time

My thoughts are clear as I see their trance
They had me lost the first time I glanced
But now its clear I see them move
now with in my mind its them I choose

Their words that comfort my darkest soul
Left alone these voices take control
They give me hope and give me faith
No longer alone I’ve found my place

Death, hate and greed voice begin to bread
Bread my hate and a painful lust
But my eyes are shut in this lustful rush
Blinded by their greed as these riddles begin to breath

They breath their rimes as they inter my mind
They rip me apart never to depart
I found it now my source of pain
But now that I have them I’ve gone insane

I grit my teeth on every word
And start to hate this life I’ve learned
Now I need some strength before they take control
For I see my future and my pass
And this breath I breath will be my last

~Steve~




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Re: Lost To Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Sherah on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:30:32 PM AEST
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This poem is Dark .. It's writen ok but needs some help.....


Re: Lost To Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 04:40:39 PM AEST
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You really dug deep with this one Steve. Love the depth of expression in this write...A few spelling errors though, just double check next time...Still, you manage to get your point across...Nicely done.
Scorp.


Re: Lost To Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:20:47 PM AEST
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Nice write steve honest and firm in conviction

Ben


Re: Lost To Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Shorty_88 on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:16:55 PM AEST
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WOW Steve
Very different to the type of poetry i have read so far. It definately portrayes a very different side to life and i can appreciate that. I think you did a really good job. I like it that you write with pure honesty.Just don't forget about the happiness in life.

Thinking of you, Tara


Re: Lost To Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 09:00:44 PM AEST
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very deep dear...very....you might like my poem The Voice So Distant From Us...

if your mind is curious please take a peak at my work....and express yourself....


summer




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