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Death of a Dream
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:27:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Today I cried.
There she is---my future to never be
averting my eyes to avoid the agony
blonde hair, green-grey eyes; age---2 or 3
I steal a glance at this miniature me
she's smiling, for just a second I hear "Mommy"
Eyes getting cloudy; my tears set free
my womanly organs fouled up so cruelly
A babe in my arms---something I'll never see
Today I died.
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:39:01 AM AEST
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This is heart-wrenchingly sad.
But the longing for something that does not come about to be realized in this world will be fulfilled abundantly elsewhere.
No need to die, no matter how sad it is.
No love is ever lost.
Beautiful poem
one can identify wit the anguish and sadness.
Thanks for sharing it with us
Peace and love
Elizabeth
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by imagenuinefake on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:39:46 AM AEST
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| That's reall sad. I love how depressing and real it is. |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:03:58 PM AEST
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wow scorp thats an deep and sad write.
great job. |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:40:51 PM AEST
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hey scorp
powerful write
nicely done
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:52:38 PM AEST
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| awww man.. this is just amazingly powerful and painfully sad all in the same pot... I thank you so much for sharing this one, for sure. dw |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by sride686 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 01:24:46 PM AEST
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| Good write my friend with so much pain in so few words and I thank you for sharing your hurt with us and getting it off your heart a little and I hope it helps. I could never feel the pain you feel and hope I never do. Take care my friend and keep your head up things always have a brighter side but only if you want to see them....Steve |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:02:55 PM AEST
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| Scorp, this is an amazing write of human agony. I am sorry it involves you. There are so many ways to be a part of a childs life though if you really want it. Adoption, foster parenting, BB/BS. Donating time at children's centers. Honey, you may never have one of your very own, but you could have many. rita |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:30:57 PM AEST
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This is soo sad! It brought tears to my eyes! This was short but you are an amazing writer to bring such feeling in only a few sentences. Amazing write!!!! Bravo! Bravo!
*5 stars
--amanda-- |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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My heart bleeds in a river of sympathy for you my friend..
A powerful sad write.. this.
B |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by mindset on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 04:48:11 PM AEST
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an expression of something lost lifes many takes on what we always never come to understand why
i think an old word spoken by an old member of the difference.
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 11:22:21 PM AEST
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| This made me so very sad. Goose pimpled up too. I agree with Rita. Peace to you scorp. Laura |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd July 2015 @ 12:12:18 PM AEST
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| Horribly sad :( but soooo ecstatic you were wrong!!!! |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by JamesStockdale on
Wednesday, 11th April 2018 @ 03:16:43 AM AEST
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Very sad but understood.
For a woman this is the worst that could happen.
Dreams often die, but don/'/t let that kill your spirit
God bless you! |
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Re: Death of a Dream
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 17th September 2020 @ 06:29:57 PM AEST
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| Oh my............ |
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