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(Until You Finally) Die
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:03:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Vampires can sense your feelings.
They see it in your face.
The pain,
The fear,
All in one place.
They know you want to run,
That's why they follow you.
They want to see you run,
Until the sun goes up and through.
Vampires want to hear you scream.
They want to bite you hard.
They listen,
They drink.
They feel your heart sink,
All in one dream.
They know you want to cry,
They see it in your eyes.
They want to watch you fly,
Until you finally die.
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imagenuinefake
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2005-06-16 11:03:43]
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Re: (Until You Finally) Die
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:06:55 PM AEST
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Nice job with this!! I really like this piece...
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Re: (Until You Finally) Die
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:01:27 PM AEST
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This was excellent! Very descriptive with great sturcture, nice write!
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