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Don't Make Her Do This
Contributed by
imagenuinefake
on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Crying in a pool of her own blood,
she cups her hand over the cut.
The blood on the carpet
the scars on her arms.
Yeah, that's what he did.
Yeah, she tried not to show it.
Don't do it again,
don't make her do this.
Don't hit her again,
you made her do this.
Don't screw this up,
you made her live.
She cries some more,
and all you do is listen
to the lullabies of cries and lies
the sullen thought of you.
Don't make her do this,
don't f*** with her.
Don't make her do this,
don't feed off her happiness.
Thoughts of her, thoughts of you...
what the hell did you do?
Don't make her do this...
whatever you do,
don't let her bleed anymore.
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2005-06-16 10:37:18]
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Re: Don't Make Her Do This
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 07:25:47 PM AEST
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I think adding structure to the poem would make it more meaningful and less confusing.
Nice write,
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Re: Don't Make Her Do This
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by youngpoet on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 11:18:03 PM AEST
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The words in this peice were full of great meaning. It's sad and it reaches out to me. Great work! i luved it.
Lauren |
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