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OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:02:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
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OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
I promise you'll never walk alone,
Your secrets are safe with me your own,
We'll laugh together and feel silly,....
Hold each other when sad,
nourish sensitivity
Come be my love and with me share.....
All the beauteous gifts I give with care.
With me stand against the ugliness of life.
Rejoice with me as peace replaces strife.
Hold me ever so close to your heart,
Dream yearning thoughts n'er to part.
Create plans and dreams forever....
Courage I'll give in every endeavor.
Let's n'er forget to have fun wherever,
Grow old with me my dear n'er bitter.
Never look back and live in the past....
Forward with love to our future cast.
A walk together toward our lovely goals.
Fused by the rhythm of two souls....
Tell me whom you love, and to you I do
Remember, endearingly, I'll always love you!
And when our journey of love is through,...
Hugging your memory each day anew.
Death do us part, still possessing my heart.
For one we've become, a love
too precious to thwart.
Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 16, 2005
"What is Love?
'Tis like the blue sky,
when the clouds meander by,
Like the Winds that embrace
the trees and rock them with ease.
Climbing the highest peak feeling triumph
over your accomplished feat. A huge hole
in your heart, that can only be filled when
you're in each others arms, and total
loneliness , like being cut in half,
when you have to part.
That's what love is!"
Created by
Lovingcritters
consue
June 16, 2005
"True Love Smiles!"
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Lovingcritters
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:57:32 AM AEST
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simply lovely
Shari |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Sherah on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:06:06 AM AEST
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| This is my life, I was blessed.I found the love of my life. This Poem was just BEAUTIFUL !!! Keep up the great work.... |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:09:07 AM AEST
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| beautiful :D well done |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 10:19:38 AM AEST
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So very beautiful, inspiring and so true.
I keenly identify with the lines:
like being cut in half,
when you have to part.
That's what love is!"
But then Love is Eternal - it does not get lost. It's the force that holds everything together and finds it's haven in God.
Absolutely beautiful ConSue
Warm love
Elizabeth
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:14:54 PM AEST
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Yes, i had this love and like yours, God needed a special angel, so mine was called home. Never again will I come close to the love I had for him. I thank God daily for the blessing he allowed me to share.
Rita |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 11:12:17 PM AEST
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| we get just one chance of this.....savor and sustain is what I say.....you my friend....captured it here perfectly.....as you do so well.....always an inspiration!!! :) |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:33:47 AM AEST
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Amazing write from an amazing lady.
hugs |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 05:54:20 AM AEST
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| beautiful absolutely beautiful,,I don't know what else to say ,,I'm in awe,,,.. |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by emystar on
Saturday, 18th June 2005 @ 05:08:42 AM AEST
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I'm speachless.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 04:14:39 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. i dont know what else to say. chris. |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 09:16:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful,I was also blessed with a love like this & I am thankful for the man every day!
This fits us to a tee! Loved it! Christina |
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Re: OUR LOVE'S JOURNEY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:31:55 PM AEST
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"For one we've become, a love
too precious to thwart."
Whatever else there is about this poem, those two lines say it all! I also loved the last part about hiking peaks - we hike when we have time and so the metaphor fits well with our ways. Blessings, J. |
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