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weight
Contributed by
whoelse
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:59:49 PM in AEST
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weight
(the force we exert on
the people,
the earth
filled with things
our opinions, decisions
can have a weight on;
to impact the world of color,
sound)
instead we worship the dead
leaves that fall on the ground
in autumn, shriveled and brown
clinging to the frigid wind
we will always try to fly,
weightless.
(but we have no control over our own destiny)
our flight is short,
and fatal
the soaring and singing, it always ends
with the crinkling sound of leaves
underneath feet that fade them into the ground.
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Re: weight
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:35:07 AM AEST
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This is true when i was 15 I had an eating disorder now i have two lil sisters 17 and a lil sis 16, and the 16 year old now has an eating disorder, both 17 had one a few years ago. I'm constantly worrie because i know what i went throu and I know its hard.
hopefully some young girls will read your wonderful poem, and take it to heart, and realise, its who you are your personality that makes you beautiful not what you look like.
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Re: weight
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:41:27 AM AEST
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Remarkably written.
Awesome work.
huggs,
emy |
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