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On the Ride Home
Contributed by
ShesAKillerQueen
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:49:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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And in his voice I heard what had been before
And what could never be
And in his eyes, like supernovas,
a dying breath of passion sat quietly..
and in his touch a longing love
forlorn and unsatisfied
a deep felt wish to be needed
a hidden broken heart, a feeling pushed aside
so I reached across the universe
and pulled him close to my beating heart
I heard the drums of battle
I heard the world break apart
And as my simple mind imploded
I felt some sweet redemption
I had broken his soul’s barrier,
I had discovered his good intentions
And when the light turned green,
We sped into a dimension unknown
As the lights blurred in and out of focus
I knew I was no longer alone.
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2005-06-15 23:49:57]
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Re: On the Ride Home
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 12:51:05 AM AEST
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A masterpeice that reaches higher than and deeper than mortal life.
Awesome, luv every word.
I'm speachless.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: On the Ride Home
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by MomentInTime on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:53:07 AM AEST
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Excellent imagery....
Like your style
Jordan :o) |
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