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Escape
Contributed by
Rikki
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:33:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Wait.
Anticipate
The great escape
From this place.
Always taste, never swallow
The anxiety for tomorrow.
Hope we can borrow, but can't touch.
This love is too much for both of us
To conjure, we're so pure, we're so sure
We can conquer the world, I'm your girl
Till the end, my best friend
You will be.
Until we
Can get away,
We'll stay and play.
Copyright ©
Rikki
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2005-06-15 22:33:26]
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Re: Escape
(User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:59:05 PM AEST
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Rikki
Prettry cool write,but be careful true love is trust.
Without trust there is nothing,but play.
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Re: Escape
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 15th January 2006 @ 05:44:52 AM AEST
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| Nice poem. Interesting rhyming scheme. I liked it. |
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