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Empty Spaces
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:14:50 PM in AEST
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Empty Spaces
Creeping past broken dreams, and forgotten memories.
Fading into nothing, are the burnt pages of sour melodies.
Do you see the dark signs of the night, the purple haze and twilight?
Chromatic pictures of deemed loses, and a crowds of cursed souls.
Marred perfection of every scent of blame, and the stinch of goals.
Have you heard silence of the sound, the deep howl of the nonexistant hound?
Death bleeding from of tired veins, and life ending from the broken hearts.
The balance of nature, and the curruption of civilization as it falls apart.
Can you feel the dots used to create this picture, or have you lost your sences in such a mixture?
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Each verse a story of its own, each word a meaning set in stone.
Such a coincidence, its a contradiction that it all needs, to even be in existence
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ForeverAlone
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:24:02 PM AEST
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"the deep howl of the nonexistant hound"?
I think many of us have heard this and cowered in silence and darkness fearing all around us. Generally it is a traumatic stress reaction to some event or happening in our lives, whether recent or in the forgotten past. I had to seek help for mine and I no longer hear the howl. Good luck.
Rita
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:09:14 PM AEST
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| clark, impressive piece, but you already know this. this is one to be proud of, especially with the meaning. and im glad that you did not do the title the way you were joking =] |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:04:03 AM AEST
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| wow i say this was an excellent piece of write. |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:38:11 PM AEST
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Grim and cold, like, well, like the end of the world. Very well-spoken, also.
Have you heard silence of the sound, the deep howl of the nonexistant hound?
That is a good line. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by xXcrossedXx on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:47:37 PM AEST
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Wow! Very deep and powerful piece Clark! The structure was excellent, as of course you made it to be. Great metaphors, I loved it.
--amanda-- |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:55:43 PM AEST
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Well...No one can explain this better than you Clark...."Each verse a story of its own; each word a meaning set in stone..." Well said, and well done!!!
Scorp ; ) |
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Re: Empty Spaces
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:56:44 PM AEST
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| beautiful words, i can always very much relate to your poetry. well done my friend |
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