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Natures Beauty
Contributed by
Mikayla
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 07:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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laying upon the grassy hill,
and staring at the sky,
lying there very still,
it makes me wanna cry.
cause natures beauty is so so strong,
it can even make you lonely,
and wanna sing a song!
Copyright ©
Mikayla
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2005-06-15 19:07:27]
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Re: Natures Beauty
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:21:47 PM AEST
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good work. Keep it up.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Natures Beauty
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by foxfire44 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:13:14 PM AEST
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| you did a good job for being new keep it up |
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Re: Natures Beauty
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by grin69 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:17:45 PM AEST
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| Hello. this poem is really cute. Good job! |
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Re: Natures Beauty
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 17th June 2005 @ 01:14:29 PM AEST
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Hm, not bad, its very short, but still shows alot of good poetry in it
~Clark |
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