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When Lonely Hearts Meet
Contributed by
Jayraja
on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 04:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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When two lonely hearts meet
The affinity formed is swift
Some times it blossoms and
Some times it justs fizzles out
When it does blossom
It may lead to a great friendship
Or it may lead to a relationship
Either way it would be wonderful
Like minded and hurt
Understanding would be apt
Mutually comforting
Mentally soothing
How long it would last
And how good it would turnout
Is a risk willingly taken
For both are foresaken
There is one thing to it though
Take it too serious and wallow
And Boy, you could land in trouble
For most these affinities are labile
Copyright © 2002 Joel Raja Kumar J
Copyright ©
Jayraja
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2003-01-05 16:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: When Lonely Hearts Meet
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 10:05:12 PM AEST (User
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That is a poem for the lonely heart.The kind that sits with a box of tissues watching a chick-flick. |
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Re: When Lonely Hearts Meet
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 12:18:44 AM AEST (User
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Very good write!
the only thing is they can be very mistacle if you can't see who you are falling in-luv with.
That's just my 2cents worth.
Luv the write!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emystar |
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Re: When Lonely Hearts Meet
(User Rating: 1 ) by Valerie_Pearson on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:39:00 PM AEST (User
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a thought for the mind, great write, thanks for sharing another with us, |
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