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Broken Dream
Contributed by
justme03
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:11:09 PM in AEST
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Once upon a broken heart
a wish that longed to stay
turned one way and then another
Wishing upon a star
wondering where you are
sitting here waiting
for my dreams to come true
as I miss you
A tear without a trace
A smile upon no face
Dreams that just don't come true,
All relate to you
Written by Emilee posted by ~Kortnie~
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justme03
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2005-06-15 13:11:09]
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Re: Broken Dream
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:12:55 PM AEST
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Oh my gosh, it is excellent. She is only 9? Get that girl her own page and let her continue to work on her poetic talent. She is totally amazing for her age.
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Re: Broken Dream
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:05:32 PM AEST
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Exactly! she actually doesn't kno i put it on here, it is a surprise. lol
I can't wait to see her face. I'm gonna help her put together her own page this weekend. |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by grin69 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:32:15 PM AEST
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| Hello. I really loved this one. Great job! |
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Re: Broken Dream
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by JustAGirl001 on
Tuesday, 21st June 2005 @ 10:34:43 PM AEST
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| OMG You GOTTA tell meh her name on here. She's really good!! You must have like serious talent in your family |
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