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Nothing
Contributed by
sonic_phoenix
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:48:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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deep sea diving into the depth
your mind's eairsed theres nothing left
truth be told all you do is lie
is there honesty in your minds eyes?
words you speak without meaning
telling me to give up dreaming
a black raven all alone
against a flock of carin crows
my will be seen from land and sky
quit hexing me hopeing i'll die
for you are nothing compared to i
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Re: Nothing
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by unluckicharmz on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:55:46 AM AEST
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| it was ok nothing personal but i think it went deeper then it needed to |
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Re: Nothing
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by unluckicharmz on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:55:47 AM AEST
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| it was ok nothing personal but i think it went deeper then it needed to |
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Re: Nothing
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by brittaney on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:35:06 PM AEST
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I dont know, I cant exactly find the "beat" To the poem. I'm not sure. But, good tribute, and I know how you feel. Ive been there many times!
Brittaney~ |
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