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Tragic Waste
Contributed by
MissEm
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:28:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pain
Fear
What ails the Human Race
A flaw
A tear
You curse the sky and Hate what made
You and your precious
heart break
"Tragic," says the Angel
"Imperfection is wasted on the Imperfect."
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MissEm
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2005-06-15 10:28:19]
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Re: Tragic Waste
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by Arden on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:50:05 AM AEST
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I am really starting to like your poetry... and i've only read two of your poems lol
"Imperfection is wasted on the Imperfect."
awesome line. the whole poem, though simple, is rather thought provocing and deep.
again, i loved this one. keep it up.
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Re: Tragic Waste
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by Winterland on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:34:23 AM AEST
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| Wow! A fantastic statement is so few lines. Very well done. |
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Re: Tragic Waste
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by MorningGlory on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:00:48 PM AEST
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Really good!!!
How you described so much in so few lines.
Great. |
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Re: Tragic Waste
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by Justintears on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:16:36 PM AEST
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| Beautifully done. Its everything i wish i could have never believed in. I hope to see more of your work. "Amazing....." |
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Re: Tragic Waste
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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volumes written in a few short lines-
Brilliant..
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