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The Shadow of Time
Contributed by
FigurelessShadow
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:06:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Time passed on a Summers morn,
It flew away as the day was born,
I walked while I wished,
I prayed while I fished,
For a girl in the blazing heat of Summer,
Somebody special,
Somebody with style.
Time flew by while hopes would die,
It's as if my prayers only brought me one friend,
A shadow, or the shadow of the time,
That flew away at the site of me.
I sat and cried,
Lonely and deprived,
Of every shred of happiness that I once held,
I cried, cried.
It's a struggle,
Living your life by following times shadow,
It's a pain,
Living your life and getting no gain,
It's torture,
Watching happy people around you,
It's surreal,
Thinking that you'll allways be alone.
But sometimes, surreal can be real...
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FigurelessShadow
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2005-06-15 09:06:26]
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Re: The Shadow of Time
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by MorningGlory on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 09:46:26 AM AEST
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Very Nice...I know the feeling, my friend.
Keep up the writing it helps alot and you're so good at it.
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Re: The Shadow of Time
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by expired_promises on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:03:20 AM AEST
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your poem is beautiful, your writing flows very well.
it's often hard to find a person to be a friend, one that you can really connect to. i can really relate to your poem. even though i have friends, close friends even and my family treats me well, i feel so alone like there is no one out there that sees or feels in the same way i do. the poem reminds me of the saying "alone in a room full of people" |
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Re: The Shadow of Time
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:26:37 PM AEST
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"living your life by following times shadow
it's a pain"
very well put.. as well as the rest of the poem
i hear the lonliness in it and hope the best
for you in finding that special someone.
Keep up the fine writes!!
dw |
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