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Love That Hurts
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:27:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I love her so much
But my heart is weak
I need you Lord
To come take my grief
Lord come take my grief
And release my mind
Relinquish my soul
From all of my pride
My heart is hurt
And I have so much pain
every time I hear her name
My heart goes insane
I hear your sweet voice
And it whispers my name
Fir in my life
Your voice will remain
You’ve touched my life
But you filled it with shame
You’ve ripped out my heart
And left me in pain
I remember your eyes
And the love that they shared
For in our hearts
Are love was so fare
But when did it go
And when did it fall
your love for me
That was lost to it all
For I’d give it all
For one more chance
To have your sweet kiss
and that loving glance
Forever in my heart
Will are love remain
But my heart will bleed red
With all of my pain
~Steve~
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sride686
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2005-06-15 06:27:30]
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 06:38:14 AM AEST
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very sad but awesomely written.
huggs,
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:05:52 AM AEST
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sride686
Sad,but awsome beautiful poem.
I share your feelings.
Sinned |
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by MissEm on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:26:22 AM AEST
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Beautifully painful - totally relatable.
Proof that words are strong medicine.
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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Steve... why does your poetry make my heart ache? Have you tried to contact her? Does she know how much she has destroyed you? This poem... it flowed so well, from beginning to end, it was like a red rose slowly wilting from the heat. take care buddy
kate |
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:33:12 AM AEST
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| Very good piece of poetry!! the emotions that flowed through it all were smooth and heartfelt. I hear the pain and feel for ya... take care and keep up the good writes. dw |
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:41:50 AM AEST
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Wow my friend that is very deep .
I hope she realize what is hurting so much.
take care
great write
huggies |
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Re: Love That Hurts
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:07:23 PM AEST
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great write very emotinal
will you send ur address to me again please it got deleted on accident
thanksssss
Michelle |
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