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Beautiful Suicide
Contributed by
PoeticMidnight
on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:21:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Once the utopian night-tide fell.
The arcanian moon intensified-
Ebony skies. Illuminating sanguinary-
Haze that blankets the mossy terrain.
Suddenly a faint amorous tune-
Emerges from beneath her balcony-
Window, harmony quoted string by string.
Deadicated to the hypnotized inamorata listening.
Mistress nears with arms to-
Embrace the ledge. Déjà vu.
Overture ravaging thoughts.
Static, she stops in mid-stride. He continues.
Eyes atrophy, narcosis. Lips-
Splinter bleeding into mouth ajar.
Skin pallid now, pavenine tint.
Hands withered and clutching ether.
Post-mortem
Paramour still plays and-
Fills her chaste mind with-
Morose longings. Too ethereal-
To swallow whole, wind through lovers’ souls.
Death-grip upon the algid wings of-
Gargoyles. Sentinel on railings.
Unworldly, she elevates to the summoning-
Edge. Perching, arms out-stretched, jump.
Wind lapping, lapping fast.
Descent into his arms.
His strephonade, her gravity.
Ensnared in folds of gauzy textile wings.
Protruding from her bosom,
Staff-like guitar, still-
Pulsing its eulogy to-
Corpus maiden resting on-
Aghast amorist.
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PoeticMidnight
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2005-06-15 01:21:37]
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by heartless_soul on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:33:45 AM AEST
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WOW... that is probalby the only thing that I can think of to say at this well writen, very elaquent, and woundrfuly portrayed poem all the images shown and the choice of words used showed a truly "beautiful suicide". I hope that this is just something that you wrote and not something that you are thinking about doing, if it is please dont. do keep up the good work and I will read you later. God bless
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by carebear_06 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:24:08 AM AEST
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| nice write. the vocabulary in the poem leaves me baffled. |
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