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For Lester 2
Contributed by
bohemian_with_a_pen
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Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:10:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Walking along the path at school
i swear i can see you ahead
i raise my arm to wave at you
and then remember.. you're dead
If only you knew what you did to me
how much pain you've caused my heart
and if i only had one wish
i would take us back to the start
back to before i met you
and before you knew of me
i'd prepare myself for what lay ahead
and wouldnt be so blind, i'd see
how dangerous it was to know you
how unstable you had always been
all those desperate outbursts
i wish i had never seen
No more dangerous 'conspiracies'
I wouldnt join your crazy games
I would do what we always joked i would do
i would finally have you tamed
It would never come to what it has
A scribbled note left on your shelf
I'd turn you into the boy i once knew
And I'd save you from yourself
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2005-06-15 01:10:41]
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Re: For Lester 2
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:16:50 AM AEST
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I can't imagene what u feel but in your writes it comes out.
U r writing a masterpeice as u deal with your own, heart-n-soul.
these writes might jus another's life.
U r doing great work, here, even in your most fresh pains.
luv, huggs, prayer, hope,
emy |
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Re: For Lester 2
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by grin69 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:39:38 AM AEST
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| Hello. This makes me ache inside for you. I'm sorry about your friend. My prayers are with you. |
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Re: For Lester 2
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by rockergirl94 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:01:33 PM AEST
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I know what it's like to lose someone and I'm really sorry about your loss. You can feel your pain in your words, and they do your situation justice.
My favourites are your first and last stanzas. I like your first stanza mainly because it's something I've done many times. I'd dream about the person I'd lost, and then wake up in the morning thinking they are still alive. It's the worst feeling when you remember they are actually gone.
I think you're last stanza is the perfect way to end your poem. I love every line, and when I read, "And I'd save you from yourself" it hits really hard.
keep writing, keep hoping
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