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I Feel You
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:39:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I drift on your flows
I laugh I cry
there are so many emotions
you have deep inside,
from your words I can see
InnerVisions of your mind
I know
when you're hot or cold
or when something's not right.
The thunder goes boom
lightning Illuminates your face
as you tend to wounds
blood is all over the place
it is on the walls
with your finger take a tatse
horror and confusion
have you in a cosmic state,
footsteps echoing down the hall
raindrops
lightly tap your window
sometimes you think
forever you will be unknown...
Things always change
nothing ever stays the same
something good is coming
just hold on babe.
I see your words
become visions in my mind
I'd like you to know
you are a friend of mine,
I drift on your flows
I laugh I cry
there are so many emotions
you have inside.
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secretwind
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2005-06-14 23:39:24]
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Re: I Feel You
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:13:35 AM AEST
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Yeah, we all got um.
a great write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I Feel You
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by givingin on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 12:36:36 PM AEST
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Good write babe.
*~givingin~* |
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