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tears and blood
Contributed by
razorbladesangel45
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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dark wings out behind her
feather caress her soft skin riddled with scars
but a single tear rolled down her cheek
standing on the edge of a knife
she watches all the smiling faces
and rolling landscapes
stepping, she leaves the ground
her wings catch the air
as she falls
for a moment she expirences the thrill
as her body dances on the air
but her feathers fade
one by one
memory by memory
the wind carries them away
until there is nuthing
but shattered dreams
and broken promises
nuthing left but tears
and shadows
and saddened eyes
falling
taking one last look
she sees watis left of her body
broken, lying on the cold tile floor
stained with blood
razor lying beside her
nothing left
but tears and blood
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2005-06-14 23:23:08]
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Re: tears and blood
(User Rating: 1 )
by chaos_01 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:05:41 AM AEST
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| OMG thats a really awesome poem keeping posting more i would love to read more. |
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Re: tears and blood
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by carebear_06 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 04:11:52 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem. i had an image in my head the whole time i read it. nice job |
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Re: tears and blood
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by unluckicharmz on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 08:41:22 AM AEST
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| dang angel you write so good and im glad your letting people read them they are good we all know it keep it up and keep adding more! tell drake to give you back your poem book! |
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Re: tears and blood
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by Urizen on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:59:00 AM AEST
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| Good poem, very dark but all the better for it I feel. It all becomes clear at the end, a god write, thank you for sharing. |
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