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words hurt
Contributed by
razorbladesangel45
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:21:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she had many friends that helped her out
and she helped them when she was down
one day at school her friend called her fat
said it louder and every one laughed
every one turned on her and called her a dweeb
please ive had enough shed beg and plead
she ran home crying the very same day
she ran to the bathroom and grabbed a blade
she pressed it harschly against her wrist
and blood rapidly poured down her skin
the next monday she came to school with scars
the kids in class went on being harsh
they called her big,round,large and wide
she wanted to yell but she kept it inside
this time she walked home and decided for fun
shed slice her neck one by one
she lost her anger she lost her blood
she lost her mind just because it felt good
soon she stopped eating, skipping every other meal
her parents never knew, she kept her lips sealed
she became skinny,pale,bony and thinner
she threw up after breakfast,lunch and dinner
one day she was bored and got her hand on some koke
she sniffed it through her nose and got dry throat
she looked around and everything became dark
she closed her eyes then fell apart
she fainted that day but no one heard her scream
her dad found her on the floor like it was a bad dream
she was rushed to the hospital in an hour or so
and her parents whispered and yelled please dont go
she just laid there in her hospital bed
cuts on her wrists and a messed up head
her parents by her side crying endlessly
but she jussed looked upon them cluelessly
she slit her wrists she slit her neck
she threw up every night before bed
she toke some drugs then it was better
then a knife
she wasted her money,her time and her life
her eyes were sweet, her eyes were kind
until a single word mutilated her mind
her friends hoped it wasnt something they said
because a few days later they found out she was dead
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2005-06-14 23:21:26]
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Re: words hurt
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by unluckicharmz on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:24:22 PM AEST
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| i love it its so good !!!!! your an awesome poet angel |
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Re: words hurt
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by acidicblasphemy on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:53:28 PM AEST
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| That was totally awesome. Amazing write. I can relate to it sort of. Not with the word fat, but I relate none the less. I'd love to read more of your work. |
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Re: words hurt
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by grin69 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 01:52:32 AM AEST
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| I really like your poem. I'm gonna go back and read it again. Pretty intense write. |
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Re: words hurt
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by angel0317 on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:05:13 AM AEST
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| i really like it, its real good, powerful |
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Re: words hurt
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by Sad-one on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 05:02:41 PM AEST
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Unfortunatly i can totally relate.This hit too many memories and actually made me cry. POWERFUL S###!
KEEP WRITING. |
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