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don't dot your i's
Contributed by
all_the_dead_roses
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:36:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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don't look down
don't give up
don't hit the ground
it will spit you up
don't give in
and anguished sin
don't look without
a crier's spout
don't listen closely
or fall on deaf ears
don't fight your heart
just because of fears
don't shout or scream
you crib of lies
jousting forwards
a bit of cries
don't look both ways
don't don't dot your i's
to cross your t's
would be a sigh
don't dance while you sit
not how we cry but
how we don't hurt a bit
not how we hold
but how we search it
not how we love
but how we hurt it
don't learn and don't decieve
don't do anything
anything but please
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Re: don't dot your i's
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:00:27 PM AEST (User
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nicely written. i had to read it twice..i like this alot. good job. |
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