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TornJeans
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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TornJeans
It is very shiny.
Very shiny.
Sunlight resounds to my retinal core.
It is a very shiny as gold and I
look at it between my legs
between my red and white sneakers
on the ground.
Very shiny, but my footprints are backwards.
Very backwards.
My kneecaps are in my torn jeans;
I have worn them my whole life,
and they bend the opposite of appropriate.
I CANNOT BEND TO GRASP
this treasure or idea.
So I suppose I shall pose
this against myself and then with that in nevermind,
I'll forever find, from gold and glitter
I'm stepping backwards with forward footprints.
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2005-06-14 20:01:23]
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Re: TornJeans
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by Momen on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:31:20 PM AEST
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wow.
i thought this was so well written,
it was great.
well done! |
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Re: TornJeans
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 08:47:45 PM AEST
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how confusing, yet oddly captivating at the
same time. This probably means something
although I don't have the brain capacity to
grasp it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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