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Walks Out
Contributed by
brokenangel
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:24:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She looks out the window
Thinking of him again
Her heart feels so hollow
Without him there with her
She's waiting for the day
When they can finally be together
She dreams about how he'll sweep her away
And they'll be together forever
She waits for his reply
Waiting to know his true feelings
As she sits there and cries
Afraid to know the truth
She takes one last look
At his last letter
And puts it in "their" book
Then walks right out of his life
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2005-06-14 19:24:49]
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Re: Walks Out
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:56:46 PM AEST
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Interesting...Like a fairytale gone wrong, but still hopeful, yet....not. lol Nice job though.
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Re: Walks Out
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:59:45 PM AEST
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this is very interesting, I agree with scorp, kind of like a fairy-tale gone wrong. I really enjoyed this. Cute, entertaining and emotional.
keep writing!
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Re: Walks Out
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 08:40:24 PM AEST
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brokenangel
Short,cute,sad makes one wonder---What else did the girl do ?
Of course the guy comes off as a jerk.
God write.
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