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There you stand
Contributed by
brittaney
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:34:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There you stand.
Looking at your feet,
Seemingly alone in this world.
Tears dripping down your cheeks,
Face as dead as a stone.
Your finger on the cold trigger,
About to end someting so fragil.
There I stand.
Wanting to run,
With no where to run to.
Wanting to shout out,
Not knowing what to say.
I hear myself whisper,
Don't do it, my voice unsteady.
Your slowly move the gun up to your face,
Leaving me there, alone.
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brittaney
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2005-06-14 18:34:58]
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Re: There you stand
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:13:10 PM AEST
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Brittaney
Whoa this is sick
You got me with
the turn at the end.
You are a clever chick.
Tremendous write.
I hope nothing like this ever happens with you.
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Re: There you stand
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:42:27 PM AEST
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Wow.
Great structure and great write!
--amanda-- |
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