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My Tears
Contributed by
sprinter27
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:56:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My 15 years
Filled with painful tears
These tears I shed not
You have to learn a lot
These tears are dry
For I do not cry
I wipe them away
Every single day
I rather not let them fall
I would rather crawl
Than cry anytime
I would rather sigh
Than cry
I’d rather die
These tears I hate to see
Come out of me
So tears I see not
Give it all I’ve got
To prevent them from flowing
I’m stopping them slowly
End them before they begin
That is my life plan
Hide them all
Don’t cry when I fall
You ask what
Is the cause of that?
When my friend
Let us end
I have to act strong
Pretend I’m getting along
Fine without him
Pretend that I can live
Without that friend that would
Do anything he could
To make me feel better
Now without even a letter
He threw me in the rain
Left me to my pain
So I will seem tough
Even though it’s rough
I won’t cry
Instead, I’ll just say ‘bye
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sprinter27
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2005-06-14 17:56:59]
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Re: My Tears
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:38:23 PM AEST
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this is so emotional adn expressive.I can relate a lot to this,im going through the smae,and have been for as long as i can remember,i doubt itll ever heal.I understand you too.t/c and keep your head up.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: My Tears
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by brittaney on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:59:53 PM AEST
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Awww this is so emotional. I know exactly how this is, im 15 myself. Just have faith in God. Good write.
Brittaney~ |
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Re: My Tears
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:33:23 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry! AWW this made me cry! but now i don't really want to.. if you can stay strong through that I need to stay strong through your poem. This was Amazing! Please keep writing!
*5 stars (add puncuation, my only advice)
--amanda-- |
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