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Door
Contributed by
happynikki
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:39:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I can't stand this pain
that will never go away
i'm hanging on by nothing
and unheard through my screams
my heart can't take anymore
i'm almost through that door
where happiness is at a stop
and i get permanent help
where i know i'll be missed
and some will realize what they lost
but it'll be too late
because i'll have already crossed that gate
i wish this to all go away
especially my pain
i want to be heard when i scream
i don't want nothing to be holding me
i want my heart to feel more
maybe wishing is too much to prevent me from going through that door...
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2005-06-14 17:39:04]
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Re: Door
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 06:41:49 PM AEST
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you showed your emotions ver good here,and i understand you,i felt this poem,with the heart,not with writing strategies,checking for a mispelling.I've been there,and seem to be there everyday too.t/c and dont give up.
love always,
andrea |
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Re: Door
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:29:03 PM AEST
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Great write, please add puncuation.
--amanda-- |
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