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mr. september
Contributed by
starry_eyed_soul
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 05:09:56 PM in AEST
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come capture me
Those autumn leaves
swirling in the breeze
come capture me
the vibrant colors
as creation gets pulled under
come capture me
stars gleaming bright
among the fair night
come capture me
in the twilight hours
i can sence the powers
come capture me
view the sunset & sunrise
as you envision my demise
come capture me
glare into the cloudy haze
help refocus my daze
come capture me
embrace the figid breath
allow the season to refresh
come capture me
mr. september
ill forever remember
come capture me
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Re: mr. september
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:05:57 PM AEST
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Very nice, creative and cute. Keep it up.
--amanda-- |
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Re: mr. september
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:08:33 PM AEST
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| Its sort of difficult to comment on anothers writing piece.. I think its very lovely.. one soul standing in one place, yet everywhere.. just like our Lord is with us always and yet everywhere.. I won't ask you if the one whom you want to capture you is human or spirit.. does not matter.. I hope what captures you is a good thing.. I love your poem.. I can vividly see you standing there. Raquel Leah |
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Re: mr. september
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 12:35:10 AM AEST
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wow i love the style u used on this... it like makes it so much more powerful. the repeating of "come capture me" just made it amazing. great job.
luv n hugs,
jennie* xXx |
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Re: mr. september
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by Kie on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:40:44 AM AEST
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This could be about love and autumn. It is very unique and I haven't seen anything quite written like it. WOW and double WOWWWW
I hope mr. september will come capture you...
May all your dreams come true...
Kie |
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