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Your Fault
Contributed by
heartbroken4ever
on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 02:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Today I woke up and didn't care
knowing no one would be there
I started cutting again
leading myself straight to my end
my heart not beating
my blood drying
I hate the person I see
the one that I keep trying to be
I don't want to live in this world
as such a lonely girl
I'm crying inside
not afriad to hide
I grab th knife beside my bed
and suddenly everything turns red
I can feel the blood rushing
and my body crushing
I down to my last breath
with nothing left
Sorry I can't be you
now look what you made me do
your the one to blame
do you feel ashamed
Copyright ©
heartbroken4ever
... [
2005-06-14 14:29:02]
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Re: Your Fault
(User Rating: 1 )
by youngpoet on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 03:35:25 PM AEST
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wowww, that was really really really good. impressive. i hope this doesnt involve you in any way.. but if it does, im very very sorry and i hope and encourage you to stop. if you ever need anyone to talk to, im always here... remember that. I loved this piece, its deep, sad, and emotional.... i felt alot through reading it.
best of luck, im always here
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Re: Your Fault
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 02:14:13 PM AEST
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This is very you babe, thats for sure...sorry i didnt notice the first time, tho i really dont like to read about this much from you, love you babe
~Clark |
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