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happiness isnt real.
Contributed by
je2ica3
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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nothings real till you make it real.
all it takes is a touch of your hand.
just a poke from your finger.
love can become real just from the touch of your lips.
a plant can live forever just because you have that green thumb.
but not all things should be real.pain shouldnt be real
the feeling of suffer shouldnt be real.
i shouldnt be able to tear.
i wish my pain would float away.
i wanna be happy i wanna smile and embrace with joy.
but thats not real happiness isnt real.
atleast not for me.
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Re: happiness isnt real.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:27:29 PM AEST
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| I like all of the examples you used for life, but you must have faith, you must believe in happiness in order to have to, why is happiness not real? Things have been hell in my life but all you have to do is say I will be happy, do not think of the things that get you down all the time, then you are on your way to being happy, do that and you will be happy. SLipSiX. I really do disagree, there can be happiness, you just need to try to have it. |
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Re: happiness isnt real.
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by THEL0STDREAMER on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:36:44 PM AEST
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| i agree.. except about happiness. i mean.. yeah all that stuff sucks when it happens, but it's those things that make happiness real. if you've never been sad, happiness wouldn't mean anything. and if yu just focus on the things that make yu happy, you'll be able to contrast sadness and happiness. If you've never had pain, would you know what joy is? I know exactly how you feel, but without one, you can't have the other. |
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Re: happiness isnt real.
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 02:44:55 PM AEST
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| It's a good poem, but I hope you realize someday soon that it will get better. Pain is real and happiness is real. We have to experience all things in life. When things get really bad, they will only look up. Feel better and the happiness will come back. Good poem! |
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