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Life
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:36:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life….
What are the answers
Why do we try
What do we think we get from this life
Money….
Respect….
These things we need
We work so hard
With so much greed
But what do we get
And what do we gain
Without happiness
Are life is the same
Hurt….
Pain….
These things in your life
They’ll rip out your heart
And take over your life
Tears….
Joy….
These things that you share
With a love in your life
But will that love be fare
Heaven….
Hell….
For soon you will fall
You will loss your life
And be lost to it all
Lost….
Confused….
Why do we live
And why must we die
What is His Plan
And what is this life
Questions….
Thoughts….
My mind is rushed
Flooded with thoughts
Of this life I live of distrust
Hate….
Greed….
This life is a joke
Hate in my life
For my life is revoked
Left to die
And dwell with sin
No help from God
And my pain wont end
Death….
Hate….
Hell….
Loss….
My life is over
I’ll take my loss
I’ll slit my throat
And release these thoughts
My Life….
My Thoughts….
All have lived
But those that die
Will be blessed with peace
From the pains of this life
Those that live
Suffer with greed
From the hate in this life
And the pains that it breeds
True peace is found
In those that don’t live
For they never experienced
The pains that life gives
Peace….
Rest….
When is my time
For I release my heart
In the words that write
For the end is to fare
“Death is the sweeter side of life”
~Steve~
“Only the dead have seen the end of war”
~Plato~
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sride686
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Re: Life
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:10:15 AM AEST
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| Steve.. my dear friend... you have truly out done yourself with this one...It was so moving in more then one way... An absolutley wonderful write... i hope to read more of this nature it was just grand... |
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Re: Life
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:15:54 AM AEST
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Excellent job Steve! The expression is great and I love the format...
Scorp. |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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| Aye hombre, this poem was killen it man, you got your emotions crossed very good and you also used good words and explanations while you did it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Life
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by MissEm on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 10:17:22 AM AEST
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Goosebumps!
I love the quotes at the end.
Since life is so painful, death has to be sweet.
Thank you
~Emily~ |
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Re: Life
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 11:23:17 AM AEST
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ahh here you go again. insane. so real, so ever changing....
kate |
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