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Hurtful Things
Contributed by
dreamweave18
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Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm tired of our fights;
It's not worth my time.
I need something better in my life...
You claim that it's fine;
People do it all the time.
I say there should be a limit of strife.
You won't let me go;
I won't let you stay.
You know that we both can't win.
I've heard so many sad poems;
their point of veiw: from a broken heart.
Now you all can see the other end.
How much will it take;
How much do we have to hurt eachother?
Will you finally see that we can't benifit one another?
I'm sorry to have broken your heart;
awhile back mine was torn apart.
By you and the first hurtful things that you said...
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dreamweave18
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2003-01-05 10:40:00]
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Re: Hurtful Things
(User Rating: 1 )
by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:50:29 PM AEST
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| I am sorry you are going through this pain. You have placed great emotions in this poem. A lovely write. Blessings from Yellowrose |
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Re: Hurtful Things
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by dreamweave18 on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 12:57:56 PM AEST
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| thanx yellowrose, i appreciate it! |
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Re: Hurtful Things
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
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HI DREAMWEAVER18,
THIS IS A VERY GOOD WRITE,
WE REALY HAVE A HARD TIME LETTING LOVE ONES GO. |
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