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Go With Me
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:36:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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My tears blind me
I can't see clear
No one can find me
No one can hear
I scream for you
I'm so badly bleeding
Pull me through
It's you I've been needing
I can feel myself dieing
Slipping away
I can hear you crying
"Please just stay!"
Go with me
I don't want to go alone
Together we'll fly free
We can both go home
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2005-06-14 10:36:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Go With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:42:48 AM AEST (User
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so very sad you never answered me before is this my Living ead Girl its Michelle hun
if it is and you need me my yahoo is still the same been missing ya tons
Michelle |
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Re: Go With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:19:43 AM AEST (User
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htis seems sad... yet a very good write |
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Re: Go With Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:29:55 PM AEST (User
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Hm this was a very interesting poem, I liked how you chose your words. Keep up the good work. I liked how you ended it to. SLipSiX. |
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