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Going Down On You
Contributed by
jyssvw22
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Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:42:11 AM in AEST
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Where my warmth ends you provide the heat
Where my heart fails you provide the beat
When my head aches your voice is my relief
And as my soul abandons me
You ease this unbearable grief
In the dead of summer I crave your warmth
A viable contender for the love that I chose
A daunting endeavor
To the intense forces that oppose
I will offer you something to remember
Something tender,
I do suppose
Where my attributes don’t suffice, you are my compliment
A simple tribute, to affirm this sacred covenant
Where my intuition strays,
And I am left hung to this tall tree
There you are to untie a choking knot
And as I drop down to you,
So freely
You make me feel worthy
For eating away,
Something so lovely
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Copyright ©
jyssvw22
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Re: Going Down On You
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by xXcrossedXx on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:46:34 AM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL! Bravo! Bravo! This was an amazing piece! The first three lines are absolutely beautiful! Very creative, intelligent, inspiring.. Wonderful!
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Re: Going Down On You
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:34:59 AM AEST
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*GULP* Ummm...that was GOOD..!!! hehe ; )
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Re: Going Down On You
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by helianthus on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 10:51:55 AM AEST
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| OMFGoodness. This was yummy. Thank you. Great work! |
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Re: Going Down On You
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:34:35 AM AEST
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| this was sweet to read.. good write |
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Re: Going Down On You
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 01:35:25 PM AEST
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| This was a very good write, I loved it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Going Down On You
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by heartbroken4ever on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 03:03:55 PM AEST
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Tasty i like
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