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2 for the price of 1

Contributed by kritic_killer on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 04:51:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

If i could tell you the things on my mind
if i could hold you till the end of time
hold you through this life and the next
wrap around you like a bullet proof vest
protect you from the things that hurt
and pick you up when you fall in dirt
if i could then i would.

well im here makin it clear im nothin to fear dear.
T to the R to the O to the Y, kickin it sly
A little crazyness on the side wait n see its fun to be me.
wierd for eternity. forever it be me, my homies and monique
reachin out, smokin w@@d, trippin out, them and me.
never been in prison, never been caught. never thinkin a single serious thought.
i cant, that aint me. you start and i will put you on your knees.
set it off, up in here. the party never stops, so down that beer.
ya know what im talkin about so SHOUTscream out loud
jump up jump down, the whole crowd.
now keep it down, not a single sound. shut up NOW GET UP
and GO let the moves flow, on the dance floor, cravin for more
let it out, yall. i got what you need. so take heed...
if you wanna get hurt- mess with me.

Copyright © kritic_killer ... [ 2005-06-14 04:51:38]
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Re: 2 for the price of 1 (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:49:15 AM AEST
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The poem was very cute and touching, the end was kind of a let down though (not in a bad way) It was a terrific write!
*5 stars

The song was cute too :)

--amanda--

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