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Rebirth in a kiss
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There was once a graying statue
Frozen in light bound for ever
Destined to always be alone
It was a shell of what once was
Full of life glowing with a golden light
That shown through the night
It once lit up the world like stars
In the moment of their birth
But it felt no love and had no one
It did not know what it wanted
It did not have what it needed
So that light slowly dimmed and died
When it did no one cried
Not a single tear
And he was forgotten
left in a museum to watch the world
Till one day you came by
It saw how beautiful you were
It found you to be so easy to love
But it could not tell you so it wept
You saw those tears and felt the hurt
And like an angel you where there
With closed eyes and lips set to kiss
You kissed the statue on its cheek
And the shell started cracking
And a golden light shown through
Like a dieing sun it exploded
And from that chaos wings came through
Like a phoenix with flames of purple shades
I was reborn
Only to be loved by you
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Re: Rebirth in a kiss
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:06:05 AM AEST
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wow!
A masterpeice of beauty.
u go now, my friend!
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Rebirth in a kiss
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:15:11 AM AEST
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Yes this was truly romatic I only wish I could feel that kind of love, this was a well writen poem and is worth of publication, bravo. read you later. be well
*H_S* |
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Re: Rebirth in a kiss
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 02:25:11 AM AEST
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| always let your light shine, for w/o it i would be lost in the clouds, muaw. |
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Re: Rebirth in a kiss
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:16:13 AM AEST
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i agree with emy, absolute masterpiece!!!
*claps* lovely words john, just amazing |
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