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our day
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:37:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You are driving me out of my mind
cause you take me everywhere when were out at night
i dream about it in my sleep
you always make me think
you've always been so kind
you make me feel like i'm melting on the ground
the sound you make makes me want to drowned
your skin is so silkey and smoothe
you've moved my heart more ways then you could
we drove away in the dark night
as we got run over by a drunkin fool
we lied there all bloody and hurt
you were in pain and all i could do was lie there in the rain
as we passd away
now i have to lisen to the man who use to say
when we pass away it will be our day
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2005-06-13 22:37:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: our day
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:36:31 PM AEST (User
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Ah Jennifer where did you get that in your head?I didn't think the poem was that bad .
It needs work but not bad.Remember your only 12 years old so i say your doing pretty good.
Love mom |
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