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The moments b4 i killed myself
Contributed by
discantbelife
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Damn this time i'm really depressed
And i can't breathe a simple breath
I have no choice but to relieve myself
Slowing cutting away my skin
Helping the pain within.
"Your never going to be anything good"
I hear all the voices and
She seems to be coming near
Mother knocks on the bathroom door
"What are you doing in there"
Saying it as if she care
"Mother,I'm relieving myself in here"
She starts to taunt me more and more
As she begins to beat and bang on the bathroom door.
I just continue to cut myself
Until the bleed can't go away,
I listen to every word she says
And slowing i begin to pray..
"Our father who art in heaven, hollow be thy name..."
I tilt my head back
And begin to slowing relax,
Thinking of everything that i've have been through
And how much better death will do,
The noise of mother begins to fade
And already i feel like i'm in a better place.
As my life begins to past away,
I remember the moment that
Lead up to this day...
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discantbelife
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2005-06-13 22:07:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The moments b4 i killed myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:28:58 PM AEST (User
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powerful
i think you have something to live for....because you are a good writer...so thats something |
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Re: The moments b4 i killed myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:40:26 PM AEST (User
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Very sad write even tho it's written well.
I use to get thoughts like that but then I realized it's easy to die but it takes much courage to live.
I'll put u in my prayers.
Luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: The moments b4 i killed myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 07:29:29 AM AEST (User
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how very powerful & just so moving and tragic.
well done...raw write, one that does make me feel sad for you....i wish you all the hope in the world |
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Re: The moments b4 i killed myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 09:40:51 PM AEST (User
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Dark poem. I hope in R/L things are better. We all have the dark times....I know my writing helps me get through them. Thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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