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Me, Snow White and her Seven Dwarfs
Contributed by
B-Rut
on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:05:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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The Man who looks just like me,
All he's got is prescriptions of what to be
His medicine is such a bore,
But he's been here once before
I feel the talk getting a little slow,
The last bathroom stop was so long ago
As the winter rain falls to the ground,
It's so hard to resist when it's all around
Swiss cheese is on my mind,
So much so it's making me blind
Just this one more time, I'll be fine,
I won't cross that thin, thin line
Just when things looked alright,
I went for more tonight
Snow White is supposed to be a fairy tale,
But which one of the Seven Dwarfs will prevail?
Now I ask "Where from here"?
Gotta try and persevere
I fear, this year
The snow needs to dissappear
And when it finally melts away,
The grass I wish to stay
For one day with a head that is clear,
Is better than being stoned for a year
So when I get that urge,
I try and push it away
Outta sight, outta mind
I finally get what he was trying to say
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B-Rut
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2005-06-13 22:05:29]
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Re: Me, Snow White and her Seven Dwarfs
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by heartless_soul on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 12:00:10 AM AEST
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I know this may sound weird but I know what you are talking about but from a different perspective, I am a cutter and it itself is a addiction, I hope that you will be able to get over this with as little trouble as possible, I will pray for you, now to the poem it was well constructed and was about a subject that is a hard one to write and post about but it tells of what it is like to have to deal with a problem like this in an inderect manner, but still good. Read you later.
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Re: Me, Snow White and her Seven Dwarfs
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Tuesday, 14th June 2005 @ 11:47:37 AM AEST
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im a cutter, im a drug addict, im suicidal, i know exactly what your saying here. Just one more, please, c'mon, one more then ill go, ill go after one more line please. F man ill never be able to get that outa my head. nice poem, i love it. keep up writing and keep staying away. i've been surrounded by it, my arms start to itch, so i grab a smoke and smoke it, and try to pass that ever fighting urge. thank you for you poem it was awsome
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